Wednesday, September 19, 2012

Lysander - "Lysander! I was..." (User-Initiated)


A. Lysander! I was searching in the teachers' lounge and I found this bracelet, do you recognize it?
Lysander: No, sorry.
A. That's ok, I saw your academic file as well!
Lysander: What? Did you read it?
A. No, I didn't dare... (Affinity: +9) [ends]
If you chose not to read it, this will be the only choice you have.

Contributors:
Nyx

Lysander - "They must not be far."


Lysander: They must not be far.

A. That means you know something! (Insist) (Affinity: -10) [ends]

B. I'm going to keep on looking. (Don't insist) (Affinity: +0) [ends]

Contributors:
Nyx
faerimagic

Lysander - "I still/Did you?" (User-Initiated)


A. I still haven't found the key. (Affinity: +0)

B. Did you know that the upcoming exams were stolen from the teachers' lounge?

Contributors:
Nyx

Tuesday, September 18, 2012

Castiel - "Come on/Did you know?" (User-Initiated)


A. Come on, tell me the truth, I'll get it all settled and won't say anything. Promise! (Affinity: -11) [ends]

B. Did you know that it was upcoming exams that were stolen? (Affinity: +0)

Corrections:
...truth; I'll...
Eliminte "it was" and replace it with "the".

Contributors:
Nyx
faerimagic

Castiel - "I'm trying to help..." (User-Initiated)


A. I'm trying to help Nathaniel find the key to the teachers' lounge. Have you seen it?


Castiel: No.

A. Ok, I won't push it... (Affinity: +0) [ends]

B. Would you tell me if you knew something? (Affinity: +0)

C. I'm sure you know where it is! (Affinity: -8) [ends]

Contributors:
Nyx
faerimagic

Nathaniel - "I have your curiosity to thank then."


Nathaniel: I have your curiosity to thank then.

A. (next)

Corrections:
...thank, then.

Nathaniel: This is what I suggest. We check the hall and as soon as the principal is not around, I'll open the door to the teachers' lounge for you.


Nathaniel: I can only let you in once, and be quick, before someone comes. Ok?

A. Ok, I understand! (Affinity: +0) [ends]

B. Umm...wait, can you say that again? (Affinity: +0) [repeats the dialogue]

Contributors:
Nyx
faerimagic

Nathaniel - "NAME, any news?"


Nathaniel: NAME, any news?
A. Yes I found your key! Here!
Nathaniel: That's great news! Thank you very much, now I just have to find the upcoming exams that were stolen.
A. Don't you think we should look in the teachers' lounge for any clues on who could have taken them?
OR
A. It was the upcoming exams that were stolen?! 
 
Nathaniel: Yes, you understand how serious this is now?
A. Yes I see...  Don't you think that we should have a look in the teachers' lounge for any clues on whom might have taken them?
Nathaniel: I'm already suspect, if someone sees you or me in the teachers' lounge, that would not be good.
A. But if you don't find the exams it won't be good for you either.
Nathaniel: That's true... Are you sure you want to risk it?

A. Yes, I really want to know who did it! (Affinity: +0)
B. No, but I feel a bit obligated.... (Affinity: -4)
C. I'm not sure, but I want to know who did it. (Affinity: +5-6)

Contributors:
Nyx
Tabbee C
faerimagic

Nathaniel - "Do you have any idea...?" (User-Initiated)


A. Do you have any idea who could have stolen the exams?
Nathaniel: Of course not, I wouldn't be so worried if I knew who did it.

A. Someone who has bad grades who would need to cheat? (Affinity: +0) [ends]
B. Someone who knew it would put you in a difficult situation?
C. Uh...I'm trying to figure it out... (Affinity: +0) [ends]

Contributors:
Nyx
faerimagic

Principal - "Hello NAME, welcome..."


Principal: Hello NAME, welcome to Sweet Amoris High School. I hope you'll feel at home quickly here in your new school.
A. (next)
Principal: I would suggest you go see Nathaniel, the student body president. He'll help you make sure your registration is complete.
A. (next)
Principal: He should be in the student council room.

A. Go see the student body president now. Leads to a conversation with Nathaniel.
B. Take a look around the new school. [ends]

Contributors:
Detecfire
faerimagic

Sunday, September 16, 2012

Ken - "Do you want to...?"


Ken: Do you want to have a look around later with me?

A. No way!

B. Well maybe later. (Affinity: +10) [ends]

Correction:
Well, maybe later.

Contributors:
Detecfire

Ken - "Wow, you've looked..."


Ken: Wow, you've looked around the whole school already, it's super big!

A. So big that I still have things to see, see you later. (Affinity: +0)

B. Well, go get lost somewhere then.

C. It's a change from our old school, that's for sure. (Affinity: +10)

Corrections:
...see. See you later.
...somewhere, then.

Contributors:
Detecfire

Ken - "So, tell me..." (User-Initiated)


A. So, tell me...
Ken: Yes NAME?

A. You wouldn't have any money for my enrollment fees by any chance, would you? (Affinity: +5) (Money: +15) [ends]

OR

A. You haven't seen an enrollment form around, have you? You get your enrollment form when you choose this option. The little creeper... XD This only appears if you didn't get your enrollment form.
B. (don't ask anything else) [ends]

Contributors:
Detecfire
faerimagic

Friday, September 14, 2012

Ken - "Yes, they didn't ask for many forms..."


Ken: Yes, they didn't ask for many forms so it was pretty quick.

A. (next)


Ken: I hope that the kids in my class are nice.

A. There's no reason why they shouldn't be. (Affinity: +5) [ends]

B. Don't count on that too much. (Affinity: +0)

Contributors:
Detecfire

Ken - "Yeah, thanks!"


Ken: I heard that you moved so I asked to be transferred to the same school as you. Isn't that great!
OR
Ken: Yeah, thanks! I'm super happy that my transfer was accepted, I really wanted to be in the same school as you.
OR
Ken: You're speechless, eh? When I heard that you moved, I asked to be transferred to the same school as you.

A. Really? That's nice. Have you finished your registration yet? (Affinity: +10)
B. Uh...yeah, that's great, but I have some things to do still... (Affinity: +6) [ends]
C. I don't believe it! Are you going to follow me around like this for long?! (Affinity: -6) [ends]

Contributors:
Detecfire
Ally

Ken - "Hey NAME, how's it going?"


Ken: Hey NAME, how's it going?
User: Ken?? He was in my old school, what's he doing here?

A. You?! What are you doing here?! (Affinity: -10)
B. Good, how are you? But what are you doing here? (Affinity: +6)
C. What? ....!! (Affinity: +5)

Contributors:
Detecfire
Ally

Castiel - "Oh so the little new student..."


Castiel: Oh so the little new student knows the band Winged Skull?

OR

Castiel: And what you're wearing is a style maybe? This is a rock band t-shirt, and they're great.

A. Yeah, I like rock sometimes. (Affinity: +7) [ends]

B. Yeah! Rock me baby, I love rock. (Affinity: -7) [ends]

C. I hate all of that... (Affinity: -7) [ends]

Corrections:
Oh, so the little...

Contributors:
Detecfire

Castiel - "Oh yeah, and what does it remind you of?"


Castiel: Oh yeah, and what does it remind you of? Something you saw in one of your cartoons or something?

A. Get out of here, that's a popular goth brand. (Affinity: -7) [ends]

B. Get out of here, that's a rock band. (Affinity: +7)

C. Get out here, that's a popular online game. (Affinity: -7) [ends]

Contributors:
Detecfire

Castiel - "You again?"


Castiel: You again?

A. Yeah, am I bothering you? (Affinity: -7) [ends]

B. That t-shirt reminds me of something. (Affinity: +4)

C. Do those clothes mean you're trying to be a rebel or something? (Affinity: -14)

Contributors:
Detecfire

Castiel - "You wouldn't..." (User-Initiated)


A. You wouldn't happen to have my enrollment form, would you?

B. You wouldn't happen to have any money for my enrollment fees, would you?

C. (don't ask anything else) (Affinity: +0) [ends]

Contributors:
Detecfire

Castiel - "Yeah, I've never seen anyone...


Castiel: Yeah, I've never seen anyone so uptight in my life.

A. I don't agree, he seems like a good person. (Affinity: -9 to -14) [ends]

B. Yeah, I think you're right there. (Affinity: +7) [ends]

Contributors:
Detecfire
Ally

Castiel - "Yeah, I know what you mean."


Castiel: Yeah, I know what you mean. Good luck with that idiot president.

A. Have a problem with him? (Affinity: +0)

B. (say nothing else and leave)

Contributors:
Detecfire
Ally

Castiel - "Especially with new students..."


Castiel: Especially with new students, I'm Castiel.

A. I'm NAME, nice to meet you. (Affinity: -7) [ends]

B. I'm NAME, I'll be back later. I just got here and already they're pestering me with all this paperwork. (Affinity: +4-6)

Corrections:
...students. I'm Castiel.
...paperwork!

Contributors:
Detecfire
Ally

Castiel - "So what?"

Castiel: Do I look like a tour guide to you?

OR

Castiel: So what?

A. Are you always this nice? (Affinity: +4-6)

B. You seem very rude. (Affinity: -7) [ends]


Contributors:
Detecfire
Ally

Castiel - "Hello/Hi..." (User-Initiated)


A. Hello, I'm new. I'm looking for someone to show me around. (Affinity: -7)

OR

A. Hello, I'm new. I was told to find the student body president. (Affinity: -7)

B. Hi, I'm new. (Affinity: +0)

C. ...Hi? (Affinity: +6) [ends]

Contributors:
Detecfire
faerimagic

Thursday, September 13, 2012

Nathaniel - "Hey, you never told me..." (User-Initiated)


A. Hey, you never told me if you found your enrollment form or not.


Nathaniel: Oh yes, I'm sorry, it was really mixed in with other papers, I put it aside for you. Here you go.

A. You wouldn't happen to have any money for my enrollment fee, would you? (Affinity: -6) [ends]

B. (don't ask anything else) (Affinity: +0) [ends]

Corrections:
...papers. I put it...

Contributors:
Detecfire

Nathaniel - "So your file..."


Nathaniel: So your file, is it coming along? I haven't had a chance to see if your enrollment form was around here, can you come back just in case?

A. Humpf... Can you stop bothering me about that please? (Affinity: -6)

B. Do you only talk about paperwork? Are you that uptight? (Affinity: +0)

C. It's obvious that you don't have a lot of fun. (Affinity: +4)

Corrections:
...around here. Can you come back later...

Contributors:
Detecfire
faerimagic
Ally

Nathaniel - "Oh NAME, I forgot to tell you..."


Nathaniel: Oh NAME, I forgot to tell you, I'm sorry but your registration couldn't be completed.
A. This is a joke, right? (Affinity: +3)
B. What? Why? What did I do wrong? (Affinity: +6)
C. ...Are you kidding me? There's no way I can enroll here? (Affinity: -6)
Nathaniel: Awh... You fell for it! OR
Nathaniel: Ha! ha! you should see your face! So, pretty good joke, huh? OR
Nathaniel: It was a joke, so it seems you don't have a sense of humor either.
A. "Ha, ha, ha" (sigh) Pretty lame joke. (Affinity: -8 to -11) [ends]
B. Your jokes are really not that great. (Affinity: +0) [ends]
C. Ah that's not funny, you had me worried. (Affinity: +5) [ends]

Contributors:
Detecfire

Nathaniel - "Oh, you're the new student..."


Nathaniel: Oh, you're the new student, sure, I'll take a look.
OR
Nathaniel: Uhh... You're the new student I suppose... I'll take a look then.
A. (He turns around and shuffles through his papers before coming over to me)
Nathaniel: Well... It looks like there are some things missing here. Let's see... You still need a photo for your ID and $25 for the enrollment fee...
A. (next)
Nathaniel: And the most important thing, you seem to have forgotten to hand in one of these forms, the one with your parents' signature. You need to take that in too.

A. It's not a big deal, isn't it? I mean it's only paper work. (Affinity: -11) [ends]
B. I checked everything by myself, are you sure? (Affinity: +5) [ends]
C. Ok, I'll leave it all with you then and come back when it's ready. (Affinity: -4 to -6) [ends]

Contributor:
Detecfire

Nathaniel - "Hello, I'm Nathaniel..."


Nathaniel: This isn't a circus, no need to shout. I'm Nathaniel, the student body president, what do you want?
OR
Nathaniel: Hello, I'm Nathaniel, do you need something?
OR
Nathaniel: I'm Nathaniel, can I help you?

A. The principal asked me to come and see you about my enrollment form. (Affinity: +6)
B. You have to check my enrollment form, the principal said so. (Affinity: -6)

Contributors:
Detecfire

Nathaniel - "Hello/Hi" (User-Initiated)


A. HELLO?! Nathaniel, are you in here? (Affinity: -6)

B. Hello, I'm looking for the student body president. (Affinity: +6)

C. Hi, have you seen Nathaniel around? (Affinity: +0)

Contributor:
Detecfire

Wednesday, September 12, 2012

Nathaniel - "That's true..."


Nathaniel: That's true, it doesn't change much... I just know their names and faces, I don't really talk to them.

A. It seems like you would!

B. You're just a student like everyone else after all.

C. You mean you don't take advantage of your high profile? (Affinity: -4) [ends]

Contributors:
faerimagic

Saturday, September 8, 2012

Nathaniel - "Come on..."


Nathaniel: Come on, there's a lot of students here. I just know all the teachers.

A. Teacher's pet! (Affinity: -8) [ends]

B. Are they nice?

C. Yeah well...they're just teachers after all. (Affinity: +2)

Correction: Yeah, well...

Contributors:
faerimagic

Lysander - "Keys don't disappear by themselves."


Lysander: Keys don't disappear by themselves.

A. Yes, that's why I think a thief took them.

B. You wouldn't have them by any chance?

C. Yes, I'm going to keep looking for them. (Affinity: +5) [ends]

Contributors:
Nyx

Lysander - "Do you know...?" (User-Initiated)


A. Do you know anything about the key for the teachers' lounge?


Lysander: What is there to know?

A. The spare keys have gone missing. (Affinity: +0)

B. Someone tried to frame Nathaniel.

C. There's a thief in the school who stole them.

Contributors:
Nyx

Castiel - "Did you hear?" (User-Initiated)


A. Did you hear? Nathaniel is in serious trouble, he lost the key to the teachers' lounge and some stuff got stolen.


Castiel: And this concerns me how?

A. You're not happy? Since you can't stand Nathaniel. (Affinity: -4) [ends]

B. Really? You're not at all involved in this?

C. Don't you think we should try to help him after all? (Affinity: +0) [ends]

Contributors:
Nyx
faerimagic