Showing posts with label Contributor: Nyx. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Contributor: Nyx. Show all posts

Sunday, October 7, 2012

Nathaniel - "I told you..."


Nathaniel: I told you that it was a bad idea to do that kind of thing.

A. Oh don't lecture me, ok? (Affinity: -4) [ends]

B. But it was so tempting... I was just unlucky. (Affinity: +6) [ends]

C. I was just in the wrong place at the wrong time, but I'd do it again if I had a chance. (Affinity: +0) [ends]

Contributors:
Nyx
faerimagic

Nathaniel - "NAME! The principal told me..."


Nathaniel: NAME! The principal just told me that you were being punished because she caught you graffiting a locker with Li?!

A. Yes, it's your fault, it took me too long to put those spiders in her locker and I got caught! (Affinity: -4)

B. Yes, Li saw me, she got involved and we both got punished. (Affinity: +0)

C. Yeah...it all fell on me, and this is the first time I've done anything... (Affinity: -4)

Contributors:
Nyx
faerimagic

Castiel - "Do you know where I can..." (User-Initiated)


A. Do you know where I can find something to clean graffiti?


Castiel: Do you really think I'd know? I don't get caught doing things like that.

A. (Leave) (Affinity: +0) [ends]

B. (Insist) (Affinity: -11) [ends]

Contributors:
Nyx

Castiel - "You did it..."


Castiel: You did it in the daytime? Are you stupid or what?

A. I'm sorry I don't have your expertise in the matter! (Affinity: -6) [ends]

B. You could have warned me if you that it was a bad idea! (Affinity: -4) [ends]

C. Well yeah... it's done now, I'm punished and now I have to clean the graffiti. (Affinity: +0) [ends]

Corrections: 
Rewrite the first option as "Well, I'm sorry I don't have your expertise in the matter!" to make some sarcasm show.
...now. I'm punished...

Contributors:
Nyx
Tabbee C
faerimagic

Castiel - "My plan..." (User-Initiated)


A. My plan for getting back at her backfired on me.

Correction: 
"backfired".


Castiel: How?

A. I got caught spraying her locker!

B. You're idea stunk! I got caught by the principal! (Affinity: +0)

C. I can't believe it, I got caught at the last second! (Affinity: +0)

Contributors:
Nyx
faerimagic

Nathaniel - "NAME, I thought..."


Nathaniel: NAME, I thought about it, I might have an idea for you.

A. I'm listening?

Corrections: 
...about it. I might...


Nathaniel: She has always been scared to death of spiders, you might be able to use that?

A. You're telling me I should go and find...spiders? Yuck. (Affinity: -4) [ends]

B. But I'm afraid of spiders too! (Affinity: +0) [ends]

C. What am I supposed to do with spiders? (Affinity: -4) [ends]

Contributors:
Nyx
Tabbee C
faerimagic

Castiel - "Oh..." (User-Initiated)


A. Oh, what can I graffiti her locker with?


Castiel: With your fingers?

A. Haha, very funny... (Affinity: -4) [ends]

B. Well I've never done it before. (Affinity: +0) [ends]

C. Are you being serious? (Affinity: -4) [ends]

Contributors:
Nyx
Tabbee C
faerimagic

Saturday, October 6, 2012

Nathaniel - "You're talking about your..."


Nathaniel: You're talking about your little revenge, aren't you? What exactly do you want?

A. To get her kicked out of school! (Affinity: -4) [ends]

B. A couple of clues, something she doesn't particularly like... (Affinity: -0) [ends]


C. To make her suffer! (Affinity: -13) [ends]

Contributors:
Nyx
Ally
faerimagic

Nathaniel - "Well..."


Nathaniel: Well...I was mean to her when we were little, so that kind of stuck and...my parents always believe her side of things.

A. It's obvious that she gets away with everything...


Nathaniel: Yes apparently...But I'm surprised at my sister though, I didn't think she was like that at school, I should have listened to you before.

OR
Nathaniel: That's not very nice no...but I'm surprised at my sister though, I didn't think she was like that at school, I should have listened to you before.


A. You finally admit your mistake! Will you help me then? (Affinity: -6)

B. It's ok, but you could help me then, don't you think? (Affinity: -4)

C. You can make it up to me by helping out? (Affinity: +0)

Corrections:
...me, then?

...helping out.
...very nice, you know? But I'm...

Contributors:
Nyx
Ally
faerimagic

Nathaniel - "Really? I'm sorry..."


Nathaniel: Really? I'm sorry...I told her that I'd let it go this time, but next time I would tell the administration.

A. So what did she say?

Corrections: 
So, what...


Nathaniel: Ah... She took it badly and told me that if I did that, she'd tell our parents that I pick on her in school.

A. So, that's not true is it? (Affinity: +0)

B. Serves you right, all this time I've told you that your sister is a real pain. (Affinity: -6)

Contributors:
Nyx
Ally

Nathaniel - "I finally talked to Amber."


Nathaniel: I finally talked to Amber.

A. Yes I know, thanks, she just yelled at me. What did you tell her? (Affinity: -6)

B. So I saw, it didn't take her long to yell at me, was what you told her supposed to help? (Affinity: +0)

C. And what did you tell her? It didn't seem very effective in any case... (Affinity: -6) [ends]

Corrections:
Yes, I know, thanks. She just...
So I saw. It didn't take her...me; was...

Contributors:
Nyx
Ally
faerimagic

Castiel - "So, did you get revenge...?"


Castiel: So, did you get revenge on those snobs?

A. No, I don't have a good idea yet...

Corrections:
...idea, yet...


Castiel: But it's not that hard to figure out...

A. If you have an idea, I'm all ears!


Castiel: I don't know, I haven't given it any thought...

A. Come on, pleeease. (Affinity: -8) [ends]

B. I'm sure a delinquant like yourself has a couple of ideas! (Affinity: -6) [ends]

C. Not even a little idea? (Affinity: +0) [ends]

Corrections:
"delinquent"

Contributors:
Nyx
Ally
faerimagic

Nathaniel - "You want to get revenge?"


Nathaniel: You want to get revenge? Isn't that a bit stupid to act just like her?

A. I want it to be worse than what she does! (Affinity: +0) [ends]

B. It's ok, hang on! Nothing that bad. (Affinity: -6) [ends]

C. Well apparently the administration won't do anything, so I'm going to take care of it myself. (Affinity: -4) [ends]

Contributors:
Nyx
Ally
faerimagic

Nathaniel - "You haven't seen her yet have you?" (User-Initiated)


A. You haven't seen her yet have you?

Corrections:
...yet, have you?


Nathaniel: Uh...no I haven't. Sorry.

A. Ok, I have to find some way to get back at your sister. (Affinity: +0)

B. Ok, I want to get revenge on your sister. (Affinity: -6)

C. Ok, do you want to help me give your sister her retribution? (Affinity: -13) [ends]

Corrections:
Uh...no, I haven't.

Contributors:
Nyx
Ally
Tabbee C

Castiel - "So young lady..."


Castiel: So young lady, do you have any pocket money for me too?

A. Yes, of course. Just a second, I'll see how much I have on me... (Affinity: -11) [ends]
B. Are you dreaming or what?! (Affinity: -6) [ends]
C. ... (Affinity: +6)

Contributors:
Nyx
Ally
faerimagic

Nathaniel - "Did you go talk to her?" (User-Initiated)


A. Did you go talk to her?


Nathaniel: Not yet, I haven't had time.

A. Come on, it's your sister, get a move on. (Affinity: -6) [ends]

B. Ok, anyway, there's no rush now. (Affinity: -4) [ends]

C. Ok, I'll come back. (Affinity: +4) [ends]

Corrections: "Ok, then. Anyways, there's..."

Contributors:
Nyx
Ally
faerimagic

Castiel - "I can't believe it!/Phew, finally done.../Amber is a real jerk!" (User-Initiated)


A. I can't believe it! Did you know that Amber stole money off me? (Affinity: -4) [ends]

B. Phew, finally done showing that teacher around the school. (Affinity: +5) [ends]

C. Amber is a real jerk! (Affinity: -4)

Contributors:
Nyx
Ally
faerimagic

Nathaniel - "I'm really sorry..."


 Nathaniel: Your jokes are really not funny...

A. Are you serious? Have you ever heard of sarcasm?! She really took my money!
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Nathaniel: I'm really sorry, she can be really difficult at times, at home too lately...maybe I can reimburse what she took .

A. It's not the money... You could talk to her so she'll at least leave me alone. (Affinity: +5) (Money: +15) [ends] Assuming Amber took $10, you get a $5 profit.
B. She took $10. But I also want her to learn a lesson! (Affinity: -4-6) (Money: +10) [ends]
C. Ok, give me the $10 and we'll say no more about it. (Affinity: +0) (Money: +10) [ends]

Contributors:
Nyx
Keiko
Ally
faerimagic

Nathaniel - "This time..." (User-Initiated)


A. This time I'm the victim of Amber's extortion! What are you going to do about it?!


Nathaniel: What, are you serious?

A. No, it's a joke! (Affinity: -8)
B. Of course I'm serious! Please do something. (Affinity: +4)
C. This is not the first time I've mentioned this! (Affinity: +0)

Contributors:
Nyx
faerimagic

Castiel - "Hey who's that?"


Castiel: Hey who's that?

A. That's Mr. Faraize, the new history teacher, I'm showing him around a bit.

Corrections:
Hey, who's that?
...teacher. I'm...


A. So this is the schoolyard, I'd be careful about coming here, not everyone is that nice. (Affinity: +5) [ends]

B. So here's the schoolyard, but the teachers don't really come here much if you know what I mean. (Affinity: -6) [ends]

B. So here's the schoolyard where all of the delinquants, as you can see, hangout. (Affinity: -6) [ends]

Corrections:
...delinquents...

Contributors:
Nyx
Keiko
Ally