Wednesday, October 31, 2012

Dimitry - (I can see Dimitry near the tomb) (User-Initiated)


A. (I can see Dimitry near the tomb...)


A. (I'm going to give him the cat, it's for a good cause) (Affinity: -15) [ends]

B. (I'm going to set the cat free) (Affinity: +10) [ends]

Contributors:
Ally

Dimitry - "Would that scare you?"


Dimitry: Would that scare you?

A. Y-yeah, a bit... it's never very reassuring to have a monster in front of you... (Affinity: +0) [ends]

B. Absolutely yes! I've seen so many vampire movies, they all end horribly! (Affinity: +0) [ends]

C. No, not at all... It's not that I'm bored, but I'm going to go, ha ha... (Affinity: +0) [ends]

Contributors:
Ally

Tuesday, October 30, 2012

Dimitry: "I can still tell from the smell of it..."


Dimitry: Because you smell very good...
OR
Dimitry: ...I can still tell from the smell of it.

A. (Uhhh...he...is he talking about my blood?)
OR
A. (The smell of it? Uhhhh?!)


Dimitry: I smelled an unfamiliar odor here... It's not the first time you've come around this tomb, right?

A. Yes, I'm sorry, I didn't want to disturb anything.


Dimitry: As long as you don't touch anything, I don't see a problem. She would have been happy to have visitors.

A. (He looked at the tomb with a melancholic air...)


A. Say are you....are you a real vampire?


Dimitry: Excuse me?

A. I mean... a real vampire, that shines in the sun? (Affinity: +0)

B. I mean... a real vampire, that drinks blood? (Affinity: +6)

C. I mean... a real vampire, that is scared of garlic? (Affinity: +0)

Contributors:
Ally
faerimagic

Wednesday, October 24, 2012

Dimitry: (No one is here...I'm going to...) (User-Initiated)


A. (No one is here...I'm going to back to see Black.)

Correction: Eliminate the first 'to'.

Dimitry: What are you doing here?

A. Gahh (He...He is here! I didn't even hear him coming, nor did I sense his presence!)


Dimitry: I asked you a question...

A. I... I don't know, I came here without wanting to, and Black told me to take a look around here...


Dimitry: And what's your name?

A. I'm NAME (He seems very calm, although he did scare me!)

Correction: Period after name.

Dimitry: My name is Dimitry.

A. N-Nice to meet you...


Dimitry: ...What is your blood type?

A. I don't know. (Affinity: -5)

B. Why do you want to know that? (Affinity: +6)

C. I don't tell just anybody that sort of thing! (Affinity: -10)

Contributors:
Ally
faerimagic

Sunday, October 14, 2012

Castiel - "Sign this/So you/Nathaniel..." (User-Initiated)


A. Sign this please. (Affinity: -8) [ends]

B. So you cut class again? I've got a note for you to sign. (Affinity: +6) [ends]

C. Nathaniel gave me an absentee note for you to sign please. (Affinity: -5) [ends]

Corrections:
So, you...
...this, please.
...sign, please.

Contributors:
Ally
faerimagic

Amber - "Get out of the way, we're coming through."


Amber: Get out of the way, we're coming through.

A. You get out of the way "princess", I'm not moving. (Morale: -10) [ends]

B. (You step aside and let them pass) (Morale: -5) [ends]

Contributors:
Ally
faerimagic

Saturday, October 13, 2012

Ken - "What are you doing?"


Ken: What are you doing?

A. I have to put plants here and in the student delegates' room.


Ken: Ah, that's really nice! I watered the plants in the schoolyard.

A. Do you need help? (Affinity: +6) [ends]
B. I don't care what you do?
C. Ok...well, I haven't finished yet, I'm off! (Affinity: +0) [ends]

Contributors:
faerimagic

Friday, October 12, 2012

Castiel - "Cool, that sounds good..."


Castiel: Cool, that sounds good to me.

A. Ah, thanks!

B. ...I might do the opposite then. (Affinity: -4) [ends]

Corrections:
...opposite, then.

Contributors:
faerimagic

Castiel - "Hmm... "


Castiel: Hmm... In the student council room too? What kind of plants do you have?

A. A fig tree and a bouquet of mimosas.

Corrections:
...room, too?


Castiel: Ah, what are you going to put in each room?

A. Well, I thought I'd put the fig tree in the classroom and the mimosa in the student council room. (Affinity: +6)

B.Well, I thought I'd put the fig tree in the student council room, and the mimosa in the classroom.

C. Not really, any ideas?

Contributors:
faerimagic

Castiel - "So, what are you doing?"


Castiel: So, what are you doing?

A. I have to put these plants in a classroom and the student council room. (Affinity: +0)

B. I didn't think you were interested in plants? Well, I have to put them in a classroom and the student council room.

C. Something.

Contributors:
faerimagic

Ken - "Are you feeling alright?"


Ken: Are you feeling alright? Do you know what we're supposed to do for the club?

A. Hmm...


A. We should split up and try to manager each on his own.

B. I think you have to go and look for plants, in the forest! (Affinity: +0) [ends]

C. We'll have a look around, ok? There might be something... (Affinity: +5) [ends]

Contributors:
faerimagic
Keiko

Ken - "NAME!"


Ken: NAME! I was coming to find you but I see you've found the gardening club all on your own. It's nice, isn't it?

A. Oh you're here too, should we look for something to do? (Affinity: -6)

B. Are you still following me or what?

C. (sigh) (Affinity: +0)
Corrections:
Oh, you're....

Contributors:
faerimagic
Keiko

Iris - "Hey NAME..."


Iris: Hey NAME, what are you up to?

A. Iris, just the person I wanted to see. You belong to the gardening club, don't you? Can you show me where it is?

B. I'm looking for the gardening club. Iris will take you to the Gardening Club if you choose this option.

Contributors:
faerimagic

Castiel - "You wouldn't..."


Castiel: Hey, calm down little girl. Sorry, but flowers are really not my thing.
OR
Castiel: You wouldn't talk to me like that if you knew me better! And plants are really not my thing. Find it yourself.

A. (Insist)

B. (Don't insist)

Contributors:
faerimagic

Castiel - "Castiel, I have to go to..." (User-Initiated)


A. Castiel, I have to go the gardening club, do you know where it is?

Corrections:
...to go to the gardening club. Do you...


Castiel: The gardening club? Why would I know Where that is? That's for girls.

A. I didn't have a choice, and the basketball club was even less tempting. (Affinity: -5) [ends]

B. Are you kidding me? You didn't just land here yesterday, did you? You should know where it is, at least. (Affinity: +6)

C. Well, well... "for girls" huh. That's not surprising coming from you. (Affinity: -8)

Corrections:
...know where...

Contributors:
faerimagic
Keiko

Nathaniel - "Hi, so..." (#2)


Nathaniel: Hi, so what's new? Is everything working out for you?
A. Yeah, everything's fine, except for the fact that i just ran into those three pests who still have some grudge against me, and aren't afraid to let me know.
Nathaniel: Pests? Who are you talking about?

A. They're always together, and Amber, the blond girl mentioned you. In any case, they are real idiots the three of them. (Affinity: +6) [ends]
B. They're always together, and Amber, the blond girl mentioned you. In any case, it's clear she's the worst of the three, and I think she likes you, so be warned. (Affinity: -4) [ends]
C. Those three girls, especially Amber... She's a real #@=?!!! (Affinity: -2) [ends]

Contributors:
faerimagic

Monday, October 8, 2012

Ken - "Y...yes, they asked me all kinds of questions..."


Ken: They asked me all kinds of questions, I just told them the truth.
OR
Ken: Y...yes, they asked me all kinds of questions, but I just told them the truth.
OR
Ken: Wh...what? What are you talking about? I just told the truth.
A. What truth?! You told them we're going out together!!!
Ken: W...well not really, I told them that you were the love of my life. Then they took my pocket money too. Wh...why do you ask me that? You want to go out with me?

A. Are you crazy? Never! And if you say once more that we're going out together, to anyone... (Affinity: -9) [ends]
B. What do you mean they took your money?
C. M...maybe, but that's their problem, watch what you say though! (Affinity: +11) [ends]

Contributors:
faerimagic

Ken - "Hi NAME" (#2)


Ken: Hi NAME

A. Ken, what did you tell those girls?! (Affinity: +6)
B. Ken, did those three girls come and bother you? (Affinity: +11)
C. You!!! Stop telling people that nonsense! Especially those three! (Affinity: -5)

Contributors:
faerimagic

Castiel - "Ah ha, you're trying to get me expelled..."


Castiel: Ah ha, you're trying to get me expelled from school, is that it? I'm a gentleman, I don't hit girls.
A. I see, well, until next time Mr. Gentleman.
Castiel: Ha, wait! What do you mean with a bit of luck? Are you trying to test my patience? (He pinches me and flashes me a smile)

A. ?!? (Laugh and leave)
B. ?!? (Laugh and pinch him back) (Affinity: +12) [ends]

Contributors:
faerimagic

Castiel - "Ah ha, and what exactly am I supposed to do?"


Castiel: Ah ha, and what exactly am I supposed to do? Go rough them up a bit?

A. You would do that? I'll even pay you if you want!

B. You're horrible, I wouldn't go that far!

C. Haha, go for it, with a bit of luck you just might beat them in a fight. I'll be the referee. (Affinity: +0)

Contributors:
faerimagic

Castiel - "Hi." (User-initiated, #2)


A. Hi
Castiel: NAME, what are you doing here?

A. Nothing much, what about you? (Affinity: -6) [ends]
B. I'm trying to avoid three stupid girls. (Affinity: +0)
C. I'm avoiding this guy, he's a real drag... (Affinity: +4-6)

Contributors:
faerimagic
Ally
SD

Sunday, October 7, 2012

Amber - "Oh, here you are!"


Amber: Oh, here you are! Great timing, we're going to eat lunch in a restaurant today, but Charlotte forgot to bring money. You can help us out, can't you?

A. Yes, of course (Give $10 to Amber) (Money: -10) (Morale: -5) (Affinity: +) [ends]
B. No, I don't think so... (Don't pay) (Money: -10) (Morale: -5) (Affinity: -) [ends] Amber will still swipe some money from you.

Contributors:
Keiko
faerimagic

Nathaniel - "Well administrative work..."

Nathaniel: I'm saying that for your benefit, don't come crying to me later...

OR

Nathaniel: Well administrative work is not particularly fun... I guess I should try to lighten up a bit once in awhile.

A. Come on, I'm sure you can be fun if you want to be. (Affinity: +4-6) [ends]

B. Sorry, I didn't mean to upset you... (Affinity: +5) [ends]

C. You should try laughing a bit once in awhile, it might help. (Affinity: -6) [ends]

Corrections:
Well, administrative...
...awhile. It...

Contributors:
faerimagic
Detecfire
Ally

Nathaniel - "I told you..."


Nathaniel: I told you that it was a bad idea to do that kind of thing.

A. Oh don't lecture me, ok? (Affinity: -4) [ends]

B. But it was so tempting... I was just unlucky. (Affinity: +6) [ends]

C. I was just in the wrong place at the wrong time, but I'd do it again if I had a chance. (Affinity: +0) [ends]

Contributors:
Nyx
faerimagic

Nathaniel - "NAME! The principal told me..."


Nathaniel: NAME! The principal just told me that you were being punished because she caught you graffiting a locker with Li?!

A. Yes, it's your fault, it took me too long to put those spiders in her locker and I got caught! (Affinity: -4)

B. Yes, Li saw me, she got involved and we both got punished. (Affinity: +0)

C. Yeah...it all fell on me, and this is the first time I've done anything... (Affinity: -4)

Contributors:
Nyx
faerimagic

Castiel - "Do you know where I can..." (User-Initiated)


A. Do you know where I can find something to clean graffiti?


Castiel: Do you really think I'd know? I don't get caught doing things like that.

A. (Leave) (Affinity: +0) [ends]

B. (Insist) (Affinity: -11) [ends]

Contributors:
Nyx

Castiel - "You did it..."


Castiel: You did it in the daytime? Are you stupid or what?

A. I'm sorry I don't have your expertise in the matter! (Affinity: -6) [ends]

B. You could have warned me if you that it was a bad idea! (Affinity: -4) [ends]

C. Well yeah... it's done now, I'm punished and now I have to clean the graffiti. (Affinity: +0) [ends]

Corrections: 
Rewrite the first option as "Well, I'm sorry I don't have your expertise in the matter!" to make some sarcasm show.
...now. I'm punished...

Contributors:
Nyx
Tabbee C
faerimagic

Castiel - "My plan..." (User-Initiated)


A. My plan for getting back at her backfired on me.

Correction: 
"backfired".


Castiel: How?

A. I got caught spraying her locker!

B. You're idea stunk! I got caught by the principal! (Affinity: +0)

C. I can't believe it, I got caught at the last second! (Affinity: +0)

Contributors:
Nyx
faerimagic

Nathaniel - "NAME, I thought..."


Nathaniel: NAME, I thought about it, I might have an idea for you.

A. I'm listening?

Corrections: 
...about it. I might...


Nathaniel: She has always been scared to death of spiders, you might be able to use that?

A. You're telling me I should go and find...spiders? Yuck. (Affinity: -4) [ends]

B. But I'm afraid of spiders too! (Affinity: +0) [ends]

C. What am I supposed to do with spiders? (Affinity: -4) [ends]

Contributors:
Nyx
Tabbee C
faerimagic

Castiel - "Oh..." (User-Initiated)


A. Oh, what can I graffiti her locker with?


Castiel: With your fingers?

A. Haha, very funny... (Affinity: -4) [ends]

B. Well I've never done it before. (Affinity: +0) [ends]

C. Are you being serious? (Affinity: -4) [ends]

Contributors:
Nyx
Tabbee C
faerimagic

Saturday, October 6, 2012

Nathaniel - "You're talking about your..."


Nathaniel: You're talking about your little revenge, aren't you? What exactly do you want?

A. To get her kicked out of school! (Affinity: -4) [ends]

B. A couple of clues, something she doesn't particularly like... (Affinity: -0) [ends]


C. To make her suffer! (Affinity: -13) [ends]

Contributors:
Nyx
Ally
faerimagic

Nathaniel - "Well..."


Nathaniel: Well...I was mean to her when we were little, so that kind of stuck and...my parents always believe her side of things.

A. It's obvious that she gets away with everything...


Nathaniel: Yes apparently...But I'm surprised at my sister though, I didn't think she was like that at school, I should have listened to you before.

OR
Nathaniel: That's not very nice no...but I'm surprised at my sister though, I didn't think she was like that at school, I should have listened to you before.


A. You finally admit your mistake! Will you help me then? (Affinity: -6)

B. It's ok, but you could help me then, don't you think? (Affinity: -4)

C. You can make it up to me by helping out? (Affinity: +0)

Corrections:
...me, then?

...helping out.
...very nice, you know? But I'm...

Contributors:
Nyx
Ally
faerimagic