Showing posts with label Typos and Errors. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Typos and Errors. Show all posts

Thursday, January 16, 2014

Nathaniel: "By the way..." (User-Initiated)


A. By the way, have you ever had a girlfriend before?


Nathaniel: I...yeah, but no big deal.

A. Wow. I would never have thought that a guy like you would have already had a girlfriend!

B. How come your single now then?

C. I see... (Affinity: -4) [ends]

Corrections:
*you're

Contributors:
faerimagic 

Thursday, November 14, 2013

Castiel: "Well..."


Castiel: Well...Not all that much but I'm not not a lost case either. Why?

A. For no reason.

B. To see if you had a motive to steal those exams of course!

C. Do you know any students who are having problems with their grades? (Affinity: +0) [ends]


Corrections:
"...not a lost case..."

Contributors:
faerimagic

Sunday, November 3, 2013

(I started to....)


(I started to head away from the hall and I saw the principal leave the student council room furious, I wonder what happened...)

A. (Next)


(Nathaniel followed the principal for a bit and saw me in the hall)

A. (Next)


You were there? You heard everything?...

A. Uh no, in fact... I was just going by and I saw the principal leaving here furious.

Corrections:
"...leaving here furiously."


Someone stole some documents that are kept safe in the teachers' lounge.

A. It was you?!


Of course not! But the teachers' lounge is always kept locked. And I'm the only student who has a copy.

A. I think I understand...


My key disappeared and the principal thinks I have something to do with it.

A. I can see why...


Nathaniel: But I have nothing to do with it, someone stole my key and then stole the documents from the teachers' lounge...

A. (Next)


Nathaniel: If I don't get this sorted out very quickly, as the principal said, I'll be expelled...I don't know what to do.

A. I'll try to help you. Can we go look in the teachers' lounge? We might find something there.


Nathaniel: No, like I said, I don't have the key anymore, and I'm not allowed to go in there until this is settled.

A. Ok, I'll go see what I can do then.


Nathaniel: Thank you NAME

A. Sure.


(Nathaniel left, the poor guy he looked really upset by all this...It's understandable, he really likes being student body president and takes it seriously.)


A. (Next)


Peggy: Oh oh! Did you hear that?! "The student body president in the hot seat" ! That would be a great headline! I can't wait to find out more about this case!

A. What?! Think about him, you can't do that!

B. It is a scoop! (Raises affinity with Peggy) [ends]

Contributors:
faerimagic

Saturday, November 2, 2013

Castiel: "Hahaha, tell me another one."


A. I'm telling you, we had just finished cleaning the graffiti when it appeared! We ran away.


Castiel: Ah...that's right, you were in the staircase after school, I forgot...

A. Oh yeah? Have you seen something strange there before?


Castiel: Now that you mention it...

A. Yes?


Castiel: I remember a rumor. A couple of years ago a teacher fell down those stairs and died, and his ghost haunts the place ever since...

A. Are you serious?!

Corrections:
"A couple years ago, a teacher..."


Castiel: You are so gullible sometimes! Of course not, ghosts don't exist little girl.

A. I think they exist. (Affinity: -4) [ends]

B. How do you explain what I saw then?!

C. I don't know, but something was there in that staircase. (Affinity: +0) [ends]

Contributors:
faerimagic

Friday, January 4, 2013

Ken - "..." (User-Initiated)

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A. ...

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Ken: I asked the principal if I could change groups but she said no.

A. Good thing! (Affinity: -5)

B. Ah, that's ok.

C. You'll be taking care of flowers, that's good too.

Corrections:
...good, too.

Contributors:
faerimagic

Ken - "I'm still..."

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Ken: I'm still disappointed though...

A. By the way, you wouldn't know where the basketball club is by any chance? (Affinity: +0)
See below picture.

B. (Leave) (Affinity: +0) [ends]

Corrections:
...disappointed, though...
...is, by...

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Ken: Of course! You go to the schoolyard and you take a right and ...

A. And?

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Ken: Oh I'm sorry, I was talking about the gardening club. I don't know where the basketball club is.

A. Ah, that's ok, anyone can make a mistake. I'll go see if I can find it. (Affinity: +6) [ends]

B. ...You're one messed up guy...

C. Don't you listen?

Corrections:
Oh, I'm sorry, I...

Contributors:
faerimagic

Nathaniel - "You wouldn't..."

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Nathaniel: You wouldn't happen to be lying to me, would you? The principal often asks new students to participate in clubs to help them settle in.

A. Well I couldn't care less about school clubs. (Affinity: -4) [ends]

B. Why don't you take care of it? You love doing every little thing the principal says, don't you?

C. Sorry, that came out wrong...Um, do you know anyone who belongs to the club?

Corrections:
Well, I couldn't...

Contributors:
faerimagic

Thursday, December 27, 2012

Ken - "Excellent, I can't wait!"


Ken: Excellent, I can't wait!

A. Do you know what we're actually supposed to do at the gardening club? And where is it anyway?

Correction: "...it, anyways?"


Ken: I've got no idea...I'll go find out, ok?

A. (Keep talking to Ken)

B. (Leave)

Contributors:
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Ken - "That's great..."


Ken: That's great, we can garden to together then!

A. Yeah, I'm sure we're going to have fun. (Affinity: +11)

B. I think I'm going to ask the principal if I can change. ..

C. But I'm not going to garden with you!

Corrections: "...garden together..." "...change..."

Contributors:
faerimagic

Ken - "Ken, are you..." (User-Initiated) (Gardening)


A. Ken, are you supposed to help out in a club too?

Comma should be after "club".



Ken: Yes! The I'm sure that you chose the gardening club, just like me, right?


B. Uh...Unfortunately, yes I did.

C. Well...If I had known I would have chosen the basketball club.

Contributors:
faerimagic

Friday, November 9, 2012

Castiel: "I understand..."


Castiel: I understand, but I'm not as stubborn as he is. I'm not signing anything. And I'm sure he's just doing this so that I might get expelled from school.
OR
Castiel: I'm not signing anything, understand?! And I'm sure he's just doing this so I might get expelled from school.

A. Ok listen, I'm tired of all this, sign it and if you're not happy, take it up with him. (Force Castiel to sign the absentee note) (Affinity: -17)  (Nathaniel's Affinity when you talk to him: +24) [ends]
B. What, really? I don't want you to get expelled, forget about the note, I'll give it back to him. (Don't get Castiel to sign the absentee note) (Affinity: +24) (Nathaniel's Affinity when you talk to him: -17) [ends]

Corrections:
Ok, listen, I'm...
..expelled. Forget...note; I'll...

Contributors:
faerimagic

Nathaniel - "So?"


Nathaniel: So?

A. So... he said if you were a man, you'd go ask him yourself. (Affinity: +0) [ends]

B. "Come and ask me yourself if you're a man!" (imitate Castiel's voice) (Affinity: +6) [ends]

C. Your a guy, you're the student body president, you go ask him yourself! (Affinity: -4) [ends]

Correction: "You're..."

Contributors:
faerimagic

Nathaniel - "Have you seen him?"


Nathaniel: Have you seen him? Is it ok for the note?

A. Yes and no, he doesn't want to sign your note.

Correction: Have you seen him? Did you get him to sign it?


Nathaniel: He's as stubborn as a mule, you have to insist a bit more and he'll sign.

A. Ok, I'll try again... (Affinity: +2) [ends]

B. Humpf! You talk of a favor... (Affinity: -4) [ends]

C. Yeeaah...but that guy gets on my nerves. (Affinity: +6) [ends]

Contributors:
faerimagic
Tabbee C

Sunday, November 4, 2012

Dimitry: "What did you want to ask me?" (User-Initiated)


A. What did you want to ask me?


Dimitry: Well, would you accept to...

A. ?


Dimitry: No, nothing it would be too inconsiderate on my behalf...

A. Well, now that you've brought it up, I would prefer that you finish!


A. (He seems to be weighing the positive and negative sides before talking)


Dimitry: Would you let me drink your blood?

A. Wh-what?! I thought you only drank the blood of animals.


Dimitry: That is true, but like I said before, it's not nourishing enough for a vampire, and over time I'm getting weaker and weaker...

A. Uh...


Dimitry: And I must admit that seeing you in those clothes brings back painful memories. The mission that I tried to complete for Mary that I wasn't able to finish...

A. I-I see... Is it painful?


Dimitry: I don't know.

A. (I'm too scared, but I can''t bring myself to say no after all he's been through...and if it's a dream than there are no risks after all...) You get the CG if you choose this.

B. (I can't. If it's just a dream, the pain could wake me up and I would like to stay a little longer...) You will NOT get the CG if you choose this. Dimitry will ask you to stay with him, but before you can answer, the whirlwind will come and the episode will end.

Corrections: ...and if it's a dream, then...

Contributors:
Ally
faerimagic

Wednesday, October 24, 2012

Dimitry: (No one is here...I'm going to...) (User-Initiated)


A. (No one is here...I'm going to back to see Black.)

Correction: Eliminate the first 'to'.

Dimitry: What are you doing here?

A. Gahh (He...He is here! I didn't even hear him coming, nor did I sense his presence!)


Dimitry: I asked you a question...

A. I... I don't know, I came here without wanting to, and Black told me to take a look around here...


Dimitry: And what's your name?

A. I'm NAME (He seems very calm, although he did scare me!)

Correction: Period after name.

Dimitry: My name is Dimitry.

A. N-Nice to meet you...


Dimitry: ...What is your blood type?

A. I don't know. (Affinity: -5)

B. Why do you want to know that? (Affinity: +6)

C. I don't tell just anybody that sort of thing! (Affinity: -10)

Contributors:
Ally
faerimagic

Sunday, October 14, 2012

Castiel - "Sign this/So you/Nathaniel..." (User-Initiated)


A. Sign this please. (Affinity: -8) [ends]

B. So you cut class again? I've got a note for you to sign. (Affinity: +6) [ends]

C. Nathaniel gave me an absentee note for you to sign please. (Affinity: -5) [ends]

Corrections:
So, you...
...this, please.
...sign, please.

Contributors:
Ally
faerimagic